Write a sharper first email to an executive.
Make your reason for writing and your ask easy to see.
Before
Hi Taylor,
I wanted to introduce myself and reach out because I thought this could potentially be relevant to your team. We help operations teams reduce time spent preparing weekly reports. Would you be open to a twenty-minute conversation next week to see if it fits?
Best,
Sam
One way to sharpen it
Hi Taylor,
We help operations teams reduce time spent preparing weekly reports. Would you be open to a twenty-minute conversation next week to see if it fits?
Best,
Sam
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